Wednesday 24 February 2016

A TALE

It was in a little dark park at seven o'clock in the evening.
The main character is a teenager (sixteen years old) with brown-orange hair, brown eyes and he is wearing the school uniform. The uniform is a white shirt and black trousers. Oh! and his name is Rito.
It was seven o'clock in the evening. There were too many clouds in the sky, probably it was giong to rain. Rito was walking to his home carrying a plastic bag with the food that his mum told him to buy. He reached the park, the final part of his walking to go home. He was walking across the park. Suddenly, he heard a noise. At first it was so weak, but when he approached, it was louder. The noise was loud now. He realized that the sound came from a swing where a little girl was sitting.
- "What are you doing here?", asked Rito. "It's so cold here and it's going to rain".
There was no response from the girl, she only looked at him for a moment and she continued playing.
- "Are you alone?", asked Rito worried; "You don't want to go home or something?", silence again.
Rito decided not to take action and go home, but when the girl said something:"I am always alone, I don't have a family", Rito turned back and said surprised:"What? That's impossible! If that is so you have never been born....Maybe....your parents are...". "No!", she said. "I'm here to do something important".
- "Something important?". "Yes. ....by the way, so you know about death?". "Well...", said Rito "I know something from school but not much.... . Why are you asking?". "No....nothing, I have a little request". "What is it?", said Rito. "Can you help me to cross the road?", said she. "Ok... if that is what you want...".
Rito took her hand and dropped the plastic bag. There was nothing on the orad, people, cars.... Rito was crossing the zebra crossing when suddenly, he saw a car coming from nowhere, he turned back, the girl wasn't with him anymore...
The next day was Rito's funeral.

WRITTEN BY ALEXEY ROMANOVICH (3º ESO B), our future story teller, I think it's an amazing story.
Thank you very much Alexey for letting us read your mind

2 comments:

  1. An amazing story from an outstanding boy!Congratulations!

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    1. Thanks for reading and appreciating the tale, it really is amazing! And the boy is extraordinary!

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